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Archives[2]


July 2009Edit

  1. Meg Whitman

Can we use this now......huh...purty please with a cherry on top and bribe under the table...LOL!--Amadscientist 22:17, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

June 2009Edit

Definition of Truthiness SeriesEdit

  1. Brevitruthiness
  2. River City, Iowa

--PhantomDuck 21:53, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Foreign Culture SeriesEdit

  1. Tentacle Monster
  2. Yuri

--Mutopis 13:45, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Tentacle MonsterEdit

Amazing work! I feel like I know everything there is to know about tentacles, tentacle monsters and tentacle raep to last a while now!

Let a few more other editor-heroes check it out and add their suggestions before moving it over for voting!--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 08:27, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

YuriEdit

I'm going to have to get to this tomorrow, sorry.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 08:35, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Travelogue SeriesEdit

  1. Chinatown
  2. Hawaii

--PhantomDuck 15:53, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

ChinatownEdit

Nice mix of text and lists with a healthy dose of images sprinkled throughout. The only thing standing in its way to being featured is the number of red links!

When those links go from red to blue, it will be ready to move to the featured page to be voted on.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 07:34, 2 July 2009 (UTC)


HawaiiEdit

One visit to this page and I feel as though I've visited the entire state! As soon as the red links are fixed, it should be good to go.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 07:34, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

  • Maybe add a glossary section to Americanize some of those freakish unAmerican words!--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 07:35, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Recreation SeriesEdit

  1. Mile High Club
  2. Slutty Flight Attendant
  3. Flight Attendant
  4. Pool Halls
  5. Drive-In Movie

--PhantomDuck 15:53, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

May 2009Edit

ColbaniumEdit

SuggestionsEdit

I like it. On to the voting! --Atenea del Sol 14:06, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

April 2009Edit

Barack Obama (Secret Republican)Edit

SuggestionsEdit

There seems to be more pictures than text. Maybe if the images were a little smaller and moved around a bit? Also, if the intro described what the page was going to be about a little more clearly, that might make it easier to add more to the page.

For instance, is this page supposed to be about how Obama is actually a Republican? Does that mean he will he deliver "real Americans" to the promised land of Ronald Reagan?

So far, Obama has picked his cabinet, signed several laws and visited a few countries. In what way have these actions--which GOP leaders have denounced--were actually something that Reagan would have done himself?--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 08:19, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

UPDATE

  • Apparently, there is an army of Secret Republicans we didn't know were out there. In addition to Obama Secret Republican, there's now a Kanye West (Secret Republican). I can see this becoming the new "Religious Babies."
  • Maybe you can include a bit about other Secret Republicans?--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 01:56, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

ArmagaydonEdit

SuggestionsEdit

I think all this page needs is a little more explanation. Instead of a few points, maybe there could be an explanation for each of the points. America needs to know all the details, no matter how liberal or how gay they are!

For instance, we all know why we should avoid the Armagaydon, but how do each of the points in the "Ways To Prevent It" section help us do that?

Also, there's no mention of a gay anti-Christ! How can there be an Armagaydon without a gay anti-Christ!? Maybe this page can be written like a gay "Omen?" You remember that movie about that boy with the "666" on his forehead.

There's got to be more online about Revelations. Hell, I don't think we even have a page about The Book of Revelations!--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 08:40, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

Christ's RazorEdit

SuggestionsEdit

The idea behind this page just cracks me up! However, I think the page needs a set up (introduction) before it gets into the punch line. I also think if it sounded more like a commercial, it will be ready for voting.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 08:51, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

I love the concept, but you need to watch more razor commercials to get a sense of how it should flow, because right now it seems a bit choppy. I'd say once it's smooth it's featured-word material. --Atenea del Sol 15:14, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Ponzi Motor CompanyEdit

SuggestionsEdit

The intro needs to be a little shorter. As it stands, there is only one section, if the intro was shortened a little bit, some of it could be "expanded" into more sections.

For instance, there could be a section on who PMC has fought (this could include the government and other companies that have R&D departments to work on innovations). I love the bit about buying up smaller companies; it sounds so very Microsoft!

Maybe you can add how they fight unions and their employees in that section too.

It might be funny to have a section on their "only idea" too.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 09:00, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

Saturday Night Live Edit

I made the entire page, enjoy! --PearlsFan 21 03:20, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

SuggestionsEdit

I added a few sections and moved things around a bit. It seemed to be more of a bunch of lists than an encycloptic entry.

Try putting more explanations in the sections.

Also, I added a section for Lorne Michaels. You have to write something about him!--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 02:10, 20 May 2009 (UTC)





















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